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Morning Awakening by ~segiesue:iconsegiesue:





In the afterglow
Of the morning dew
Everything is crystal.


Silent and brand new,
Each morning
Earth's rebirth.

Petals yawn,
Exposing vegetative bodies,
Stretching towards the bruised raw,
Plump purple sky.

Pale yellow rays
Emerge from temporary hibernation.
Illuminating
Everything in its wake.
The humming warmth
Intoxicating.

Melodiously intricate,
Playfully divine,
A robin carries out
Its morning song.

The static, fresh air
Collapses and sighs.
Leaves, tinged with signs of death,
Applaud erratically in response.
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Author's Comments

Poem #4 for my Creative Writing class.

Any constructive criticism would be much appreciated!

Thanks ^-^

Enjoy!

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:iconkayraa-killz:
That is beautiful! Great job sis! =3

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